Yay! I'm finally done :] this took me like, 3 dayssssss ARGHHH, the longest one yet, other than my flashes. I coloured them in differen styles, cuz I couldn't make up my mind Lol.
They're all in destiny island, if it's too hard to figure out. xD Roxas is wearing his Orgaization outfit because I was too lazy >.< I think Sora is a bit dark as well, :\
Critiques are welcome.
I had alot of things to say, but I can't remember now :\
--- Kingdom Hearts and its awesome characters (c) Square Enix
Ok, firstly. I'll start from left to right. Axel He doesn't look like Axel. He's always grinning, and snickering. He's cocky on the other hand, but in your picture he looks really caring. I think his eyebrows are too high, or maybe it's something else because I'm bad at facial expressions as well.
Kairi Looks really comforted LOL. ^w^ No necklace? n_n She looks great, no sweat on her.
Namine She looks expressionless, which is good - because Namine doesn't really smile a lot. Instead of looking into the point that most of your characters are looking at, she's staring into a distance. Is that supposed to be there? :]
Roxas Is hawt lOL :3 Yeaaa, sorry but I'm a fan girl >w< I his hair shades! It's probably the best I've seen yet from you - he he :3 Nais skin shading as well, 1 fact though, I think you forgot to shade in his cloak x_x
Sora Sora is tanned but he's finee :3 *squeals* (least he's smiling) Great job on him. He's great as well.
Riku He's soooo handsome :3 The way you shaded him to the side is great, and CG for hair other than different from all lol *0* thumbs up.
Demyx Gahh i love him!! He's cute. Demyx should be a cheeky person, he should be grinning and smirking or something like that. Looks like he interrupted their photo, but instead made it look ncier LOL ^w^
Thumbs up, great job PS. this is the longest critique I wrote so far O_O (267 words including these ones.)
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Group photo, ehh?
Ok, firstly. I'll start from left to right.
Axel
He doesn't look like Axel. He's always grinning, and snickering. He's cocky on the other hand, but in your picture he looks really caring. I think his eyebrows are too high, or maybe it's something else because I'm bad at facial expressions as well.
Kairi
Looks really comforted LOL. ^w^
No necklace? n_n She looks great, no sweat on her.
Namine
She looks expressionless, which is good - because Namine doesn't really smile a lot. Instead of looking into the point that most of your characters are looking at, she's staring into a distance. Is that supposed to be there? :]
Roxas
Is hawt lOL :3
Yeaaa, sorry but I'm a fan girl >w<
I
Nais skin shading as well, 1 fact though, I think you forgot to shade in his cloak x_x
Sora
Sora is tanned but he's finee :3 *squeals* (least he's smiling)
Great job on him. He's great as well.
Riku
He's soooo handsome :3
The way you shaded him to the side is great, and CG for hair other than different from all lol *0* thumbs up.
Demyx
Gahh i love him!! He's cute.
Demyx should be a cheeky person, he should be grinning and smirking or something like that. Looks like he interrupted their photo, but instead made it look ncier LOL ^w^
Thumbs up, great job
PS. this is the longest critique I wrote so far O_O (267 words including these ones.)
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