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This was originally a pic i drew for my advert for english :3 it had alot more text on it though. hehe. First of all, tehre are no shades eheheh. just the little highlights :]
The orange ball-thing was originally meant to be a basketball, but my sister drew a sort-of face there and i just decided to leave it :] Comments
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June 30
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It's a good idea for an advert, but anyway -
The way you coloured looks like you rushed it - if you compare it to the way you normally colour. Some parts are not shaded (I'm aware you mentioned that), but it looks very plain and flat.
The background is simplistic, which is a good thing - but it doesn't look very... life like. The flowers do look like flowers, but they aren't very 'neatly' presented. Sparkles were nice around the picture by the way
The sun is really awesome, and so as well as the clouds and sky. Overall, you did a good job but next time you should focus more on trying not to make the picture so flat. ;]
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